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The Shark Freed from Her Cage

Written by Ellen Morris Prewitt on February 13, 2014. Posted in General. 8 Comments on The Shark Freed from Her Cage

I am getting out of sync with time. Arriving at 9:45 for my 10:45 appointment. Waking at 5am and returning to sleep by re-entering my dreams. Sincerely believing it to be Monday when I attended church that morning but it seems SO LONG AGO. I don’t want to scare you, but I think I’m drifting away from the framework of this world,...

Blind Justice

Written by Ellen Morris Prewitt on February 12, 2014. Posted in General. 7 Comments on Blind Justice

I HATE politics. I HATE getting riled up about current events. I HATE taking positions that appear so judgmental. Then I read an article like the one this morning on the defense strategy in the latest “Stand Your Ground” shooting in Florida. “Loud music” “SUV” “Black” “Teenager” “Thumping...

I’ve seen the Glimmering

Written by Ellen Morris Prewitt on February 8, 2014. Posted in General. 2 Comments on I’ve seen the Glimmering

That little glimmer of hope that appears like a flickering flame when you’ve been immersed in darkness for so long you’ve allowed the prospect of success to dim, smoldering. Not a giving up—no way!— but a dampening down, a waiting, a refusal to let hope spring into false hope until real tender presents for a true igniting. That’s...

Word to the Wise: Pay Attention to Your Beta Readers

Written by Ellen Morris Prewitt on February 5, 2014. Posted in General. 3 Comments on Word to the Wise: Pay Attention to Your Beta Readers

Three years ago, or maybe four, a man I did not know arrived at my writing group, and during a long conversation about the first chapter of The Bone Trench, he said, “I’m ready to see Cat Thomas return.” I assured him Cat, who opened the novel in a brief scene, would be back shortly, specifically at the beginning of the next...

Redeeming the Synopsis

Written by Ellen Morris Prewitt on February 4, 2014. Posted in General. 6 Comments on Redeeming the Synopsis

I know you hate it, but consider writing a synopsis of your novel. Not to accompany a submission to an agent—usually the only reason any of us take on this mind-stupefying task. Do it to see the holes in your manuscript. Like many, I have long hated the idea that in order to gain agency representation, the writer had to reduce her 80,000 word...

I Remember the Dancing Samoans

Written by Ellen Morris Prewitt on February 3, 2014. Posted in General. 2 Comments on I Remember the Dancing Samoans

I think too much from the spot I stand in. So when I watched the Coke commercial during the Superbowl and felt tears start in my eyes, it never dawned on me people would complain. Calling the commercial names, some much worse than un-American. At best, divisive. To put this in perspective, my favorite physical metaphor of community is the San...

When Following the Money is a Good Thing

Written by Ellen Morris Prewitt on February 3, 2014. Posted in General. 4 Comments on When Following the Money is a Good Thing

My last blog post left several people wondering, what did Utah do? The state examined the amount of money homelessness was costing the state and implemented a “housing first” program that gives supportive housing to those who have experienced homelessness for an extended period and have a disabling condition. You can read more about...

Why Utah Set Me Off

Written by Ellen Morris Prewitt on January 31, 2014. Posted in General. 7 Comments on Why Utah Set Me Off

I want housing for the homeless to be designed by men and women who have been homeless. I want us to ask: where would be most convenient for you? What do you want in terms of size? What community space do you want? Do you want a front porch? I want us to care enough to design space useful to people instead of putting folks in available apartments...

The End of Revision

Written by Ellen Morris Prewitt on January 29, 2014. Posted in General. 4 Comments on The End of Revision

I’ve been living in the guts of the story I wrote like a surgeon grasping the beating heart, it pumps in rubbered gloves, to repair it and, now out, I’m lost, wandering in the real world.

16 Truths about Revision

Written by Ellen Morris Prewitt on January 27, 2014. Posted in General. 7 Comments on 16 Truths about Revision

Things I have re-learned from this round of revision on The Bone Trench, my manuscript about Mother Mary and Jesus called back Memphis by a private prison project: Description must flow from the character observing it Description works best when in motion (e.g. She wore a tight skirt vs Her tight skirt tugged as she bent to pick up the skull) Too...